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I am a survivor
Because I wish to survive.

I am a dreamer
Because dreams are my break from reality.

I am a lover
Because I yearn to love.

I am a seeker
Because I will seek for my joy.

I am an observer
Because I can observe my enemies,
and know the score.

I am a killer
Because I kill to save others.

I am a hunter
Because I will hunt for truth and lies.

I am a decider
Because I can decide if I can trust you.

I am a teacher
Because I teach the future.

I am a student
Because I still learn.

I am a fighter
Because I do not believe in surrender.

I am a hater
Because the world dispises my spirit
and wants to bring me down.

I am a rebel
Because when the world spits in my face,
I will spit back.

I am a leader
Because I refuse to break down.

I am a wise one
Because wise one's understand lies.

I am a child
Because I can still laugh at other's stupidity.

I am an adult
Because I can put up with you.

I am innocent
Because my heart throbs with ignorance.

I am robbed
Because I still feel the pain.

And I am a survivor
Because survival is not my first concern,
but it happens to me anyways.
I wrote this a whle back, about a person whose been through hell and back, who is able to rise above the pain and misery, and stands before the world, defiant and unafraid.
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megalotty1998 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
while reading this i couldn't help but notice how well this describes the main character of a novel i'm writing
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Pietroschek Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful work! :juggle: I am just an old man, facing the demon of mine, to shovel the snow with my damaged spine...
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Kawaiipandamelon Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Writer
It is so deep and well put together! I love it :) It's accurate and you could experience the feeling the person may have felt while reading it! utterly amazing!
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SupernaturalChic16 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a beautiful and very deep poem. Some of the things(most of them) are totally me! It's sooo good. U r a very good poest.
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Zireael07 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliant!
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic! A great message for those who struggle not to give up, because they have survived the hardships and pain they went through. The couplets are simple, but very profound. Well done. :star:
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Chaleka Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very inspirational poem. For me, the best revelations were "....i teach the future..." and "..understand lies."
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DeadMannequin Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice, I like it!
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pokemonfart Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Writer
this poem really describes me
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Silverdream729 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really inspirational!
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